Wonderful, keep up the wonderful work and you will go far. 5/5

Juls

Good job,
your work seems to have meaning behind every stanza
I like that
Em

I liked it

I really enjoyed that poem. its seems so out of this world but so down to earth.
keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your poetry. :)

Hey dis was so gwd....felt the emotion.....keep it up...
luv dia

Another great poem, it's so dark and moving, loved it, well done

Well, that was really excellent! i'm so glad i cam here. you really are talented and definately write some awesome stuff. ttyl, Suzie

Ooh.. 5 to you

Thanks for the comment you left on mine..this is really really good!!! keep up the good work!! you really let out how you truly feel!!! xo nelle

I really enjoy this poem.
i think u have made your own fiction world. where u live. when u alone.
5/5