Tell me he's okay! It is always so hard fitting someone new into the picture. I hope you don't exactly learn to get along wit him...but actually find yourself just doing it because it feels right! I'm always here...not only just about the dumbass boys! I LOVE YOU!

Wow. I love the twist. .. erm.. wow.. there's actually nothing else I can say about this poem... erm.. It's just wonderful! I loved it sweety. Beautiful part II, very surprising as well. Very well done (once again).

Love you Emma -xxx-

What a sad twist at the end... =( I hope that your dad is okay, and I'm so sorry that you've gone through all this. You're in my prayers, and if you need anything I'm always here. Great writing xoxo

Will there be a Part 3? I'm hooked. Awesome, as always.

Lv A, x

This is such an amazing poem..
juts like you, em'! lol.

i love you so much..
you are my best friend and you know that you can always talk to me about anything!

Very good poem.. very touching. i know the feeling been through something simular.. 5/5..

This is a great second part of the story. it is so full of emotions and i hope you do a third or fourth part. if you do please let me know so i can read it. i would like to know more about this story.

Very beautifuly written... keep up the good work...