Rain

by Nearly but not quite   Jan 16, 2006


Rain cleanses
Leaving mud,
Rain washes away proplems
And leaves wetness in their place
Rain is the thing that lets you know you're alive.
The only problem comes when you get a cold
From too much rain.
That is when rain does not quite wash away all problems.

Please comment, I appreciate constructive criticism as well as praise.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Cheers D, but I'm not much of a one for structure, I often find it to constraining and a bit limited. I guess you may have noticed I don't use it a whole lot! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Yeah u could, that would be good, im always happy to read them! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    When it comes to nature poems, structure is harder. Nature is more of captivating the read with images.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I wrote it ages ago, I think this one's a bit different to the original, should I try and find that version for you?

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Great poem! very origional, iv not read one about rain before :)
    keep up the great work
    luv em xxx

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