Holy moly, Bill! This is so dark and haunting. WOW!

Wow, that's different.... Although I like your love and friendship poems the best, I think this one's great as well. Nice job...keep it up and always take care.

Wow..................................................that gave me goosebumps, i could actually visiualize the whole thing. that was a good poem 5/5

Dude, thats friken awsum, u got sum real talent man!!! its like SlipKnoT's alter version of ViRuS Of LiFe!!! i loved it!!!

WOW . That s a wonderful poem. Well done

That was so well expressed, I've never been in that position, but you articulated it so well!

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Great write Bill.
Very different from what we are used to from you, but very well done.
I could see the whole thing happening as I read it.
Nice job.

This ws pretty good.....i liked it

@...wow...that was awesome...i was so into it, it was hard to get out...@

I love this poem .. dark and scary what i need right now ... have u ever cut? cause u seem to be a very good to refrence how it rlly feels!

Wow