Comments : Until The Day I Die

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Terrific write! 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Awww this is so so sweet. i love every word and i kno exactly how u feel but dont worry things wud get better over time. take care hun.

    Stacy

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    *speechless*

    I know it's stupid but I can really relate to this poem. I been feeling the same. I love the 'forcing a smile' line.

    Lvz Me, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I liked the ending sooooooo much
    keep it up gal ;)
    hope you're ok :)
    t.c
    L0v
    Nema x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thank you so much everyone! =)