True Love

by cassanova   Jan 19, 2006


You know those eyes,
that shine so bright,
they make you smile,
in pure delight,

or that beautiful smile,
that brightens your day,
it leaves you speechless,
with no words to say,

or that special presence,
that makes you YOU,
do you have someone,
that makes you fell like i do,

when you are close,
they have a smell,
makes you wanna do things,
that could send you to hell,

they may have some flaws,
but them you look right past,
know you'll do anything,
just to make it last,

and how you just wait,
for their soft touch,
and nothing they do,
can change how you love them so much...
.....please comment thanx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I can relate to this poem : ) i really enjoyed reading it great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Babe... this is a really good poem..... i really like that line too... "when u are close....."

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    When you are close,
    they have a smell,
    makes you wanna do things,
    that could send you to hell,

    Excellent lines! Amazing work you did. I love it. Keep up the great work. I give you a 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow 5/5 so cute..so tru...so in love. i love this i love the gentle words u used to describe how u feel its jus pure amazing. keep it up.

    regards,
    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by kallie

    What a cute poem!! i love it!! very well written!! nice work!! your a good writter!! comment back if you would!

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