That September Day

That beautiful september day
When my feelings led the way
You were in my heart
It was a beautiful start

To a beautiful relationship
With me and u tied hip-to-hip
As we got close I got scared
on that day the sorrow we shared

But we moved on it's in the past
And now we know our love will last
Because I have u and u have me
Thats the way it should always be

I am yours and u are mine
A better love no one can find
I am so happy,we're meant to be
I am so glad that now I see

That the love I feel inside is true
And it is meant for none but u
The way I feel deep inside
The feelings that I can not hide

Th way I feel when i look in ur eyes
Is like a message from the skies
I love you in every way
It all started with a september day

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