Wonderful write my friend, par excellence!!!

Great poem it is really good
great job
tabby

I really liked this one... you ra great writter!! keep it up

xox pixie

This would be perfect for a poetry slam...Where you read your poems.

Your words truly captured the reader..Meaning me...

Lol.

Great poem.

Firstly, let me thank you for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment, it's been a long time since i've heard from you.
This poem is just fantastic your choice of words and the whole format of the poem is spot on. An original write indeed.
Keep it up!

.... i am at a loss of words.... possibly my favorite poem of yours. keep up the brilliant work!
-xXx-

Absoloutely incredible work here
Just amazing quality poetry

All the Best
Sondos

Wow ! what a thought !
5/5
love
amy

Man, where have I been? I can't believe I didn't read this one before! What's wrong with me? ok, anyways... just wanna tell you that's... WOW, don't know how to explain, great job tho!

AWESOME JOB !!!

Great writing! the depth of emotions and words chosen seems to travel way beyond your years.

great once again

good luck and peace
shobhana

Excellent poem HansRik. That was so well captured and you grasped true emotion as you wrote with atmospheric terms. Fantastic, a definate 5/5. Keep writing!

Much love and God bless,
FalLeN*-

P.S: Check out some of my poems!

Wow, your writting never disapointes me, i love the way you can capture the imagination and lace it with reality.. your style of writting is one of my favourites. i love it.. i look forward to more soon xx

Great job i really like it i have u as one of my favorites and hope that u could add me

Love
micky