Nichole,

this is so beautifully said! You may have never thought
you may have never dreamed
how much everyone cared
or would ever have dared

great work! and thank you very much for your comments on my work!!
good luck and peace

take care
shobhana

Nice job!! I feel like you could maybe convey the meaning a little more, but it doesn't detract from the beauty of the poem. Great work. Keep them coming.

I could tell this came from ur heart... its different and I like it because of that... This is gr8!!!

Keep writting please, I wanna see more...

::MELI::

Hey sweety, Wonderul written, very powerful.

I'm sorry hun, I'm afraid I can relate to this very well. I guess I lost someone this way aswell. Though it's been two years ago, I still feel the pain whenever I think about it, as if it was just yesterday.

I'm proud of you, proud that you wrote a poem like this, with so many emotions and feelings in it, cause I realise it's hard to write about it.

Very well done, also thank you so much for you comment, you should know it means a lot to me.

Lotsaa love -xxx-

This is a breathtaking poem. I loved it. Especially your last stanza... it was just brilliant. You're a great writer, keep writing. I'd love to visit you soon and read some more of your great work.

Thankyou for your sweet comments. Keep on visiting me, I'm sure I wont disappoint you. :-)

Wow, this is really beautiful, really liked ur poem.
great work indeed

all the best and take care

Thx for your comments,
I also read your poems and their are very good.
I like them very much, so keep on writing.
Dat

Aww, if this really happened, im so sorry :( great poem though