Mine Crimson

by aaron c s   Jan 21, 2006


Mine crimson eyes,
bloodshot and bruised,
shows the failure,
that living mused.

Mine crimson heart,
broken and had,
shows the heartache,
from being sad.

Mine crimson soul,
captured and dead,
shows the darkness,
thine heart was fed.

Mine crimson wrists,
tortured and pale,
shows the weakness,
my life unveils.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is very good. I read almost all of your poems & i think that you are very talented. this poem is very good, 5/5
    & thanks for all of your comments, it meant alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Wow. I loved this poem it flowed perfectly though out the whole poem and had great word choice...I gave it a 5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Love it. simply said.....

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    Friggin awesome man! its amazingly written (even tho i have the faintest idea what the heck crimson is..im guessing its either a color, or an animal. lol). A! KEEP IT UP!

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Wow, what a beautifully sad poem.
    very well written
    well done 5/5
    xoxoxoxox
    *~mary*~

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