Beautiful! The flow is flawless and your words emit so much emotion.
Truly an awesome read! Take care~Holly

Funny how, in the most loving of relationships the mind whips up self doubt. You have captured that spirit so well with this wonderful poem.

Bloody brillaint love! its been a while since i've read one of your poems. iv got you on my favorites list yet i don't think i saw your poems coming up...which i kind of weird, lol. oh well, never mind. i'm getting off track. i felt this poem was great. i loved every stanza, which sadly means i couldn't pick a favorite one...sorry. the words flowed and the writing was extremly creative. i love the insecurity in it-the emotion. its a great story, and its brelliantly told. I can't wait for you next masterpiece

Brad

P.S. you may not remember me...but we have conversed poems before.

I think many of us can relate to this write....... lots of emotion in your words, beautifully written.

"My greatest fear will always be
that someday.......you will stop loving me"

^I'm sure so many of us can relate...I know I can... I guess in the end we find out, still I wish sometimes it were the other way around

terrific write! keep up the good work!

Very good poem

Awesome!!!!!! lovely!!!

i think this fear resides in hearts of all of us.
great write dear

Bharti

Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,
heeheehee

xxxx

Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,
heeheehee

xxxx

So excellently written, Luanne! This is so wonderful. I can identify with your greatest fear. It's my greatest fear for me, too. I couldn't have written this better.

That was amazing i love it!!!
Kat

Great ^^

Hey Luanne, this was an awesome piece...very deep. I liked it a lot...Keep writting please, I love to read your stuff!!!

::MELI::

Hey, i loved this poem!!!!!

I think that your poem was good

I loved this poem. Everyone in love always has this feeling and you put it into words really good!

Luanne You have such an awesome talent. I love reading your poems. It has been a while. but I will rate and comment on as many as possible.
~neens~

Nice poem, i read one of yours and had to keep reading, you are very talented :)
love steph