by JAY Poet
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Great poem!!!!!!!!!! |
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This is so beautiful...and so true. how many people are compleaty misunderstaood...5/5 |
by Void
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Hullo there, I see now why that got a 5/5. With the title I thought it was just going to be another one of those venting poems that we all do, (including myself) and I was pretty pesimistic about the whole situation. But I'm glad I went through with reading it because it's quite good. I love the third person thing about it, and the words that were chosen for it. The rhythm was really good and the rhyme scheme as well, not to mention you channeling the feeling of being misunderstood. All in all, it was a great poem. I hope you keep up with writing like this again, I really enjoy your works. You're really talented. |
by Loulou
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Wow this is so good the thing i love about it is you can relate to it nowadays |
by Danielle
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AWESOME poem!!! |
by azlan26
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The last stanza was amazing, and the whole poem reflects a society of misunderstanding |
by Megann Lee
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Very nice. I like it, the flow and rythym was perfect. Great Job. |
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Wow this is amazing.. I just loved it.. the flow the message and the word choices were beautiful.. This poem helped me to remember that just because you realize something is wrong it doesnt do any good unless you do something about it. Wow I really loved this poem soo much! nice work! |