'Together it feels so right.'

That is a perfect last line. It brings everything together so nicely. It's like your world is only shattered when you're apart. That's special. Bravo, Bill! So beautifully written.

Nice Bill, real nicee. as much as You may praise me my dear friend, somthing you're un aware of is that poetry like YOURS agitates that creativity in this poets soul ... keep up the good work friend =)

:D I love it!!!! I've been reading all your other poems but haven't had time to comment yet. This was great ^_^

OMG!!! 1@31q2! 1ur poem 3@5 simpky increadile!! ILYPAL!

Man, that was such a great poem. Truly passionate and wonderful. Full of emotions and feelings... Great job Bill, you're such an amazing poet my friend. Always take care and thanks for sharing.

Great job i really liked it

Beauitful work! i like your description of "knowing the way you give my soul rest".

good luck

This poem is beautiful...i love it...you know where to put the right word in the right situation:) goooooood job:) 5/5
*Pls check mine and tell me what you think:)

Very passionate!

Beautiful work.

--Jasmyn

Very peaceful loving feeling came over me while reading. Great job!

Great ^^

Ooooo. That was hot. Very, very nice job there Bill. I loved the images you described. Especially this part:
As I hold you this night
Feeling your hand upon my chest
My world is so right
Knowing that you give my soul rest

Loved it:)