by Loulou
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It is a good poem |
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This si a good peice. i very rarly read love poems but i like this one. |
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Thats was very good very sweet poem your very talented 5/5 |
by Ali
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Lovely Poem I cant give anything less than a 5!!!! Keep writing! |
by Allison
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That was beautiful. Keep up the good work. You are really talented. *5/5* |
by Samantha
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Nicely done. I really loved your poem... It is absoultly flawless and just simply beautiful... It flowed nice and the grammer is the best I've seen in a long time! This poem definelty deserves a five.. Keep it up |
by pebbles
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So gud. ill give it a 5. its really reminds me of there really mean it. keep it up! |
by LuvMeAlwayz
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Awesome poem !! |
by Lovely Bones
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Oh I really like this. It has such emotion. You have a great way with words.. I look forward to reading more of your stuff! |
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This poem is amazingly beautiful. I love it, the rhyming is great. And I love the message, it's so sincere. |
by Dre4meR
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Beautifully Written I must say...I love the flow of it...It was amazing |
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Praying for loves angels to lend us a hand. |
by Nelle
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It was good, i really liked it!! Soo sweet..i have had that feeling before, so i know what you mean!! Great job! |
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@...wow...the rhythm was amazing, the flow was perfect and it was beautiful overall....i honestly loved it:):) 5/5...@ |
by Eibutsina
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Feels as though its missing something, lacks depth...I think love poems should be deeply well thought out expressions but again this seems typical of the aabb rhyming schemes you see so frequently on here...you shold have stretched the emphasis on the sunset a lil more...used better imagery...still nice poem all the same. |
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Really really beautiful. i loved it start to finish. well done |
by Loulou
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This is sweet. I like this poem and how it looks different in the stanzas then your other ones i have read so far. |