Wow, what a climatic conclusion. i think it was very wise of u, 2 put this conclusion in, because it shows u wanted to bury these charactres once and 4 all. thanx 4 da comment u gave me. ma uncle died of cancer 3 months ago, but da poem wasnt bout him, it was 4 all those ppl suffering out dere
love charlz

Compelling! powerful! Passionate! well done love. Another great fitting to the selection. I love the story being told. its very informative, and is told with great grace and creativity.

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0hhhh great. all 0f them were beautiful and t0uching with heartfelt lines. each p0em t0uched my heart, thank u s0 much f0r ur c0mment 0n my w0rk. it means s0o much t0 me..y0u t0o keep up the great w0rk

l0ve always d0ra
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Wow dat poem was sad but great you have a good way of working with your words. you should have a future in poetry!

I just wanted to read and read more about this poem until it came to the conclusion. I was sitting on the edge of my chair hoping he wouldnt kill himself. it's sooo sad! 5/5