Bill, this was an excellent poem. You definitely recovered yourself with this one. I am sure everyone will forget about the other poem. Unless they read my comment, and then remember. lol

Oh wow, Bill! This is so beautifully written and straight from the heart! This really shows what a caring heart you have, absolutely amazing!

Beautiful poem! I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow. It shows the gentle generous side of you. I know you have a loving heart. :) I loved it!

Wonderful Bill... You are a true man, with a heart of gold. You will be rewarded one day my friend, a reward that you can not imagine. Well done, a magnificent write!

Beautifully expressed Bill ,
Full of thoughtfulness and love ...

You have a big beautiful heart , my friend ....and that makes a difference in this world already .

Beautifully touching !

:') Beautiful writing Bill. You have such a wonder soul... you're just amazing. Wonderful!

This is so beautiful, Bill. If I had one wish, I would wish the same exact thing.

I ask many prayers for this wish to be granted. what a beautiful write! keep up the good work! :)

True

Very nice Bill. I would make alot of the same kind of wishes as well. Especially the one where my family has smiles n their faces. Well done.

This is such an sweet poem. I like it. 5/5

What a beautiful message this holds, Bill. great piece of poetry.

good luck and peace
shobhana

This was beautifully written.

"Changing the lives of those I know
Like they say: reap what you sow "

I could not have expressed that sentiment any better myself!! 5/5

This poem was truely wonderful. Very heartfelt! Great work! Take Care Cindy