My lonely valentine's day

by Heather   Jan 26, 2006


No flowers at my door this year
No notes to light my day
No one to whom I can whisper
I love you, happy valentines day.

So many memories we made
Do you remember any of them?
Or have you moved on
And forgotten me?
As I wish I could do with you?

As I stare out the window
My thoughts are nothing new
I wonder where you are
And if your wishing that
I was there to.

*i don't know if i like how this turned out so keep checking back incase i think of how to make it better!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    But it's still really good! =P And I really like the lonely valentines day idea. Tis' Brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    Everything here is good poetry it's just kind of like maybe you could split it up into two different poems? Like take the last two stanzas and let that be part of one and then add onto the top stanza for the rest of this poem? I don't know if that makes sense lol, just a suggestion. This happens with my poetry all the time, hard for me to stick to one idea.