Another awsome one... your a really good writer

My guess, is that this poem, is about how the war is tearing apart our world. Not the war in iraq, but the war with people, in the same country, but they're torn apart because of their differences. I think, that you're talking about how it feels, and what the world looks like, not on the outside, but in the heart, because of how people take what was once beautiful, and turn it into a shattered promise, because of hate.

Great poem honey, I really like it.

Great poem. i loved it. the split meanings and all. i think this is a really good poem.
Emma 5/5

I couldn't really find the message but still a great poem... It's full of emotion and it sounded like it came from your heart.. So what was the message?
!^I Love Being In Love^!

This poem is most definitely brilliant. I didn't feel bothered that I had to read it twice to get a better understanding of it.

I absolutely love the topic, words cannot express how I am feeling right now.

~Atomic

Yet another great piece of work, loved it. seems like aftermath of an civil war & even u hv been a victim of it..u r dead & its ur soul's feeling..feel this way from ur first stanza

My troubles are long gone
Now I'm standing here
In this desolate world
Alone and abandoned

take care and all the best

This poem is really meaningful. I loved it.
Hang in there hun

The start made me think about 9/11 but after reading the whole poem, I thought about hate and pain between poeple in the world. I thought about how we fight our own people (in the same country), but why when we are on the same side?? well great poem, made me think lol

Hugs Sabrina

I couldn't find the message, but I thought it was excellent!

Okay, I tried to find the message of this and I can't.. I mean personally I thought of September 11th, but I could be wrong... Let me know.. This is great though...
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Very good poem.. thanks for checking out mine =) I voted a 5 for this one.. keep it up.. hugs from Emilia :D

Great poem, I really like it;)

This was good too, Im not quite sure what the message was though. But i liked it how you tried to have a hidden message within it. Great imagination! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Wow. I'm a retard....i couldnt' find the message. lol!! But it was deeply written and incredible.
Awsome write!

The title was okay. It wasn't strong but it tied in really well with the poem. I think the message is about how we tear each other apart and are ruining the beauty this world once held. What I liked about it was that it did seem deep and full of emotion and imagery. A change from some I've read. I thought this line, because of how short it was, didn't seem to fit in: "For help" but otherwise, what a really wonderful poem.

I have a poem about how we're ruining nature called: Free and BEautiful No Longer. Check it out if your message is sort of the same.

I'm guessing the message is you were abused and someone messed up your "little world" ...just my guess though