I have been through this as well, and it hurts like hell. your words are so descriptive! well done on another great write!
luv em

Awww wow.. this was so sad but so well written... i really liked it... keep it up

sammie

This one is my fav your an awesome writer

love always tabby

Terrific poem :)

That was really sad but it was well written lots of love xxALLYXX

This is a good poem too, expressing he hardship of losing someone you love dear to another. I also like the seacrifice you used here, meaning this poem wasn't just a complaining one. This poem expresses real love to care about someone else above your own self and doing what you can for them even when it hurts you. Excellent poem hun!

-Tainted Mikochan

That was really good. i loved everyword i just dont know what to say it was amazing.
Emma 5/5

Man, good poem, i couldn't stop reading it, from the start to end it was really good, i love the words you used it had a good flow to it, 5/5 great job

Awe omg. thats very sad. breath-taking. your writing excatly what i feel. Love it.

Awe omg. thats very sad. breath-taking. your writing excatly what i feel. Love it.

Another great poem. This one was really deep, I enjoyed reading it! 5/5 i LOVED it! Hope to read more great poems like this one from you =]

luv natalie x-x