AWESOME.....There is no other words to describe the talent that you have . Can't wait to read your next poem.
Tisha~

Beautiful poem. Truely sad but you did a wonderful job writing it, way to go. Keep it up&Keep Smilin'! :)

Damn if you don't mind that was so cool i started to cry when i read this. Wow. i can't even begain to tell you what i was thinking when i read this. It took my breath away. Hey i am making a book of my favotie poems and i was wondering if i could put your poem in there. If yes please let me know cuase this should be in there. Hey if you don't mind will you read some of my poems and tell me what you think. cause i really want the help. Thank you again for the great poem. Hope to here from you soon.

Wow this is a great poem, It is so sad, you have a real talent for writting keep it up.

Oh very heartbreaking,but sooo beautifully written
keep up this excellent job
5/5

smile:)

To be honest with you , i think YOU'RE truly gifted, and in fact, this poem inspired me to write "thorns within"...check it out, you'll see your idea but with my masterpiece. keep up the writng, you're extremely talented

Another roller coaster of new love and upcoming death.

You write alot of poems that detach yourself from the first blame. I do that too sometimes, but lately I admit the guilt of my feelings.

You are very talented, & yo express emotion amazingly! Excellent poem, in a depressing kind of way. 5/5

For some odd reasons, the rhyming scheme made it hard to follow your poem, though when read a second time, everthing made sence.

I think it was because I was so used to you writing "AABBCCDD" rhymes and not "ABABCDCD" rhymes.

Took me a while to get use to the sudden changes.

I seriously can't wait to read more though.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

That poems realy sad but way good
write sum more pls ... ive read erm all already n id love 2 read more cos they are soo good..! x x x

OMG tiny you write the best poems ever i wish i was as good as you maybe you can give me some tips!!! you should make up a poetry book with just your poems!!! i know i'd buy it!!!!
Luv dark cookie xoxo

Omg thats so sad i'm bout to cry....

I loved this people of yours
it was...amazingly beautiful
5/5

Wow that is soooooooooooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!! and very deep!!!

All your poems are excellent

It made me want to cry that wass a awsome poem keep up your awsome work

This was sad. I thought it was a good poem. I like your work. You're a great writer.

This was sad. I thought it was a good poem. I like your work. You're a great writer.

Omg this is so sweet and sad i love the ending. i was going to cry its wonderfully written and one of my favorite poems. 5/5

What can I say except WOW...I cried and I'm not one to easily cry.