Great job there devil boy!

That was really cool rikness. good job. =]
loves
Becca xx

Great job Rik, nice poem. keeps up the good work. Amie x

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
your better than me defin. 5/5
loved it lots babe ttyl

Hello there thats a wikidy poem! Nice but weird ending ghehe. Love ya forever xoxoxox ur lil devil

I said I was gonna comment....so, I just think this poem's great. Well done Rik... you're such a great poet. Take care and keep it up.

I said I was gonna comment....so, I just think this poem's great. Well done Rik... you're such a great poet. Take care and keep it up.

Hey rik...awsome poem...i knw i keep saying dis but yr reli talented..well wat do u expect u r lol..well great work...
luv dia mwa tc..

Wow its great i loved it, the emotion and feelings in the poem were great

love always
jenny

Awesome poem...way better then anything i could've written

"finally drop there colourful leafs"
"down the leafs without a sound"

leaves* instead of leafs

"Slowly zigzagging trough the air"

zig-zagging* through*

Awww, Rik! I really liked this poem! I am so glad that you didn't give up on writing! You have such an amazing talent and others deserve to read your amazing work! Good job, I really liked it!

~BJ~

*cries* that brought such sorrow to me. i love the way you seem to pour all your emotion into your poetry.

Very Moving

This was a good poem. It had a lot of depth to it.

-Taylor

Great job man u got a real gift 5/5

Cool poem Rik. =)