A Simple Little Thing...

by XTaintedxBeautyX   Jan 30, 2006


A simple little prayer,
is all it takes for us all.
Wether it's asking for forgiveness or help,
We will never have to fall.

I pray for Forgiveness,
From God himself.
Others pray for unimportant stuff,
Like money and Wealth.

I pray for Love,
To get my loved one back.
Others pray for Friends,
being friendly is what they lack.

I pray for Beauty,
Self-Esteem of mine is low.
Others pray for life,
they just don't want to go.

I pray for Help,
I don't want pain anymore.
Others pray to stop,
Abuse goes out the door.

I pray for Talent,
for I only have one.
Others pray to die,
they want their life done.

I pray for Another Chance,
then everything will be alright.
I won't give up for it is him I Love.
I hope he loves me too and Think of me at night.

© Corinne

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    I'm assuming ^he meant "himself" and "wealth", which don't rhyme the best, but they work.

    "Others pray for unimportant stuff,
    Like money and Wealth."

    Although self-esteem is important, I think most people would say that beauty falls into the category of unimportant. However, it's important to you, and it's your poem, so it's all good.

    The ending wasn't quite what I expected, but I did like it. Overall, awesome poem, 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hehe I love this rhyme scheme. It rules. But I have one problem, the words health and wealth were used once, and I don't really think they are the strongest of all rhmyes. Maybe it is just me. I don't know.

    Keep up the good work.

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