That poem is so true. thanx for taking the time to read my poem i really apreciate it.
take care
~ghetto licous~

For such a short poem it really gets the point across keep writing and take care hun sarah x

ps thanx 4 ur comment

I felt that the poem was too lacking in descriptive imagery to make up for its lack of length. A short poem needs to be both concise and profound, which is why so many poems are of average length. This poem was most certainly concise, but the descriptions it lacked are where the power of the message would have come through.

WoW that was very interested, sill 5/5

Short n dark. I like it. Also I liked how you put the 3 words in the beginning really spells it all out for you doesn't it?
Great Job
5/5

**clears thoart**
sorta creepy

Violent poem
Short. Nice choice of words.
Beautiful.
5/5
~Stevie