Melissa,

This is radiantly beautiful in it's heartfelt manner. The imagery pulls at my heart. The language, the dialoge puts a smile upon my face. The entire poem has made my day, leaving me with a HUGE smile. I love this poem.

I love the perspective from which you write. My friend, you have a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing this poem with the world.

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Melissa,
I have three words for you my friend:
BEAUTIFUL, AMAZING & POWERFUL
you're just a great gifted poet...hugs!

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This is pretty
i like the part about feeding you stars
this is a unique take on nature
very nice work there missy!

^_^ Loved the idea and the words just seemed to fit so perfectly. It made me smile, such a lovely poem!

A wonderful write, a wonderful story. It feels to me that it should be read to all the children of the world - young and old ... tell me what you want ... great line.

Superb penn, great job!!!

The imagery you evoked in this poem is simply wonderful!

a nice ode to Nature!

good luck and peace
shobhana