Beautiful Maiden!!!

by Robert Gardiner   Jan 31, 2006


Beautiful Maiden!!!

Beautiful Maiden, so lovely and fair,
Just how do I woo, win your heart my dear?
For your spell I'm engrossed under.
Utterly, you have captured me.
You and your wonder,
So hath, enraptured me,
Such, that I lose, all control.
Like a sailor to siren's rapture, I just fall, into to you.
I am, beckoned, by your call.
Your Beauty, Your Wonder, leaves me, just, enthralled.
I am, exhilarated, by your very presence.
To be mired in your mists is to be hover, in heaven,
And I would like to spend forever there.
I don't just want a few fleeting moment, I want, years,
A lifetime with you.
I'd like to spend, forever, in your heavenly hue.
And I would give anything, for just the chance,
To basks, forever, in your radiance.

Most beautiful lady, you have, captured, my soul.
I'm most enchanted, by you, and you, I'd like to get know.
Me, you have, totally, taken,
Most captivating creature, you beautiful maiden.

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

As always, your comments and votes greatly appreciated, thank you!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    "To be mired in your mists is to be held, in heaven,"

    that's a beautiful way of experiencing love, Robert!

    you are great at this!

    good luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey r0bert, a very t0uching p0em, ebautfiully written. great use 0f w0rds in thie 0ne. great j0b. keep em c0ming

    l0ve always d0ra
    [x00o00x]

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Robert,

    Yet another triumph, such majesty. Well done my friend.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Very good poem. Very many cool words, that are not used often in poems, thats very good!
    I dig it, if I may say so myself...
    Love,
    Line