Awww so sad. I hope that you are ok. Very true piece and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up :)

I have a theory that heart broken souls seem to write the best poetry, or at least some of the best. People who are so intune to their feelings and so engulfed by painful emotions are often able to be the most expressive on paper, just a though. A very nice write dear, sad of course, and I am sure difficult to write, but write it you did.

-Tainted Mikochan

Well discribed and well writen, well done

Emma, I really like this poem. It has a lot of meaning to it. It reminds me a lot of my first true love.

I loved this poem...it had so much emotion is it....I gave it a five....Thanks for the comment.I always return the favor

This is really good!

I liked it=) It was kinda in a strange beat but other then that very good. Good emotion=) nice job!

Very sweet recalling the innocence of first love. very well written, and so true...

Great poem, it has true feelings of how it feels to oose a love, greatly written, i loved it.

Very good poem and its very ture, many say that the first love never last thats its just something to learn from....5/5

I like this poem. You can feel the emotion in the poem. Good job!

--*NaydeeN*