Thee [[Last]] thing

by steviee   Feb 2, 2006


The thoughts are back they are running through my head as fast as they can . i can feel my heart pumping the blood to the tips of my shaking fingers as i hold the gun to my head.. the thought of you face runs through my brain, I can suddenly smell the type of Cologne that you wear the sent runs through my brain the last thing that i ever want to think about are the things that I loved most You, My friends & my family .. but you will be the very last thing because when I'm gone your the only thing that i want to remember . I tell my self to pull the trigger and as i do i picture you face in front of mine and your arms around my waist holding me tight like you never want to let go. then BANG i pulled the trigger and my lifeless body falls to the floor in the pool of my blood

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Cool write man ! this is too lovely or wordes i think u must break them down to stanzas.
    gave u 5/5
    u deserve it !
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Woah, quite a chilling poem, very well written. 5/5,
    take care xxx