If i were best friend

by chicago   Feb 2, 2006


Being friends is cool,
but why not be more.
You say you been hurt
more than once before.

I promise i wont do you wrong--
girl games just is not for me.
you said I'm making it hard
for you,and i should
just give up and let it be.

I wont
you and its plain to
see.I'm not
not saying i love
because i didn't know
,but what i am saying
is that i wont mistreat
you in that for show.

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  • 19 years ago

    by italiana

    This kind of repeated the other friends poem. Maybe you should just combine them?

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    "i wont you and its plane to see"

    Keep an eye on your spelling and the words you use. It should be "plain" not "plane". I also suggest putting breaks in it, it's easier on the eyes.

    Other than that, good effort, best of luck in your writing.

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