This is good, very clear and expressive

Excellent poem!!!

KEw Kew ... one of ur best definitly

Nice write. Short and sweet. If I may suggest, move the "as my friends watch me," to a new line so that it makes more overall impact on the poem, stressing that you're "Standing here all alone"... also, if you move "in a pale white gown?" to a new line, it'll keep the flow going and be more consistent throughout the poem. Just my thoughts. Great write though! Keep writing. 5/5

Awe how sad. good tho.

Great work...loved it