by martha shaw Feb 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I have a hurtfull ache. |
by Wildflower
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Wow , u got style in writing ... thats really somethin , Keep it up !! |
by aaron c s
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I liked the message behind the words and everything but......it was really choppy. the rhythm was off in every line. i liked the feeling though so good job. |
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Wow, i loved it. great job. thanks for the comment on my poem. |
by Allison
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This poem was awsome. I really liked it. *5/5* |
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Very good peice, only thing is the line "you to be gone" it doesnt actually have a couplet..... the rest of the poem flows and rhymes well though. |