Comments : Voices

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg this is amazing..seriously publishable.
    I am so amazed at the wisdom you hold, i know that every single line of that i felt so well done for being so expressive.
    Love always xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Life's all about making choices, good and bad, and you depicted that so well. This is an excellent poem, T.M.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Perfectly true. who doesnt wish for insight into the future or the power to turn back time and make those choices....im so glad to know ur working on heading on that upside. sounds like uve gained so much, keep it going

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Great work, I love all your pieces that I have read. Keep writing hun.

    ~Juls~

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was breath taking. And I know how it feels to have those voices. One tells you just to give up, And the other tells you that you're stronger then this.
    This poem actually brought a tear to my eyes. I guess because it was written on true feelings. They were described so clearly. I loved this poem. 5/5

    luv natalie x-x