Great poem i love this one
great job

TABBY

HAHAHA Bill , you definatly got me on the ending...was not expecting that . Awesome,awesome piece ....with a sensational twist at the end .

Holy crap, Bill! I decided to come and read some of your poems once again because I was in the mood for some inspiration, and I was not disappointed! This was so suspenseful and I love the ending, wow, keep up the fantastic writing!! xoxo

Bill,

This was so full od suspense, another brilliant piece of writing.

Best regrads,

Steve

Wow!! what an amazing ending...u really write great.

all the best and take care

Damn awesome write Bill!!! So thrilling. Wondefully done my friend, especially with the twist ;)

Wicked twist. You had me going on this one! Great piece.

Fantastic twist in the tale! simply outstanding - your use of the tense is superb - keeps the thrill of reading going!

keep writing!
shobhana

Wow! I was so entranced, I thought I was watching foresic files or cold case files...man this is some deep stuff. amazing!

Wonderful penn, simply superb Bill!!!

Hello. You have beautiful poems. You should enter a poem contest, you would definetly get the vote. It is perfectly written, almost too perfect :-).