Another awusm poem, you're doing really well with your words! well i gotta go but i'll keep reading tomorrow.
luv em

Hey.. Awsum poem, I can relate coz it exactly what im feelin atm. Keep up the good work.
Bec xx

This is so much like my ex, I feel the same way about her, your poem did a great job explaining how I am right now with my ex! Its so wonderful!

Btw, spelling error
Here is what you wrote
okay i admit it its jealousy im feeling,

Here is what I think it should be:
okey I admit it is jealousy i'm feeling,

But anyway it was such a sweet poem!

Keep it up I loved it!

Thanks for your c/r

-Josiah

This is really good ... ii like it alot btw thx for the commment

This is really good ... ii like it alot btw thx for the commment

I thought that it was great but I couldn't really find a flow to it. That was really the only problem I had with it. It was a really lovely poem and you have a lot of talent, it just needs some work.

Thanks the comment on my thing. It was just something i stuck there off my msn blog. So yeah. haha.

Its a hard thing to go through ay... and your poems express it well. Your an awesome writer. Keep up the good work :)

Hey.. this is reli nice.. uve got potential.. i enjoyed reading this.. plz keep on writing and practice it.. ul def. get better and ull be able to use more regular rhymes.. i lyk the poem coz its wat alomst evry1 feels lyk at some point or the other
keep going
take care
NannO
p.s. thnx for ur comment, i reli appreciate it

The same exact thing is happining to me right now, i love the tittle to. 5/5

The same exact thing is happining to me right now 5/5
~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

WOW i hear u now i have nvr liked anyone who didnt like me but vice versa..so i dont kno that but i have friends and they go through it, its tough but it'll be ok...just dont sit there dreaming all ur life to the point where u miss out on another love.

Lissa

You are very talented and you are now on my favorites list!

I can really relate, well written, good flow and great structure.

Peace. [Sole]