S.O.S.

by holly   Feb 5, 2006


Im saying that im scared
im saying someone help me
im saying i cant cope
but no one understands

i cry myself to sleep
i miss you all so bad
I want to tell somebody
but no one understands

i need a helicopter
or a rescue plane
to fly in here and save me
but no one understands

i want someone to love me
to put their arm around me
to say that it\'ll be okay,
but noone understands.

i dont know how to tell them
why should i try at all
its best to keep it hidden
because noone understands.

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  • 16 years ago

    by makayla

    Awee this one is good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonley prince

    Let it out,,
    let it be heard,
    dont hide it
    one day,
    some one will,

    understand...

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I relate a lot to this... I like it alot for mostly that reason, but also cuz I think it's good. I like the repetitive use of the last line, and then the slight change of it at the end. It made it sound kind of songy, but that was nice. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    The repitition made it sooo powerfull i loved it very nice work keep it up wow beautiful i love all your poems cause you write with passion

    Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -Laura

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