Hey yall, I know the 2nd to lasat stanza is wierd, but I couldn't figure out how to fix it. Suggestions would be awesome!
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Callie

Nice nice...I love it
5/5 keep it up
love yaz
xoxo

I think that may have been your best one...Excellent Job..The best i have defanetly seen from you..Keep up the Work....5/5
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Holy smokes, this blew me away its fantasitc, wow, you think I write well hah, thats funny lol cause' your writing is so much better than mine, you are very talented dont you ever stop writing hun, take care,xxoo

Beautiful. How much more could you ask for froma poem??