Will it take my demise for you to realise??

by RainbowDemon RogueDoll   Feb 6, 2006


You cant see with one eye
You cant hear with one ear
You cant breathe with no air
Wot will it take for you to understand that you are my sight, my hearing, my movement?? Wot will it take for you to realise you are my other half? without you i don't exist. you are the one i love and always will be. without you i cant be...
will it take mi to die for you to realise you are the one for mi? that you are my heart beat. that you are my thoughts. my every breathe. will it take mi to die for you to realise that you were? that you are?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    I Can see what you mean.. I Can sort of relate to it.. it's very well done.. but it could be better like you said.
    But it's good.. soo keep it ip. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I really liked it. I feel the same way, it's hard to handle.. But good stuff. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    I understand just what u r sayin and I love it keep it up 5/5

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