Holy smokes!! This poem is incredible, I doubt I could ever write a poem in that form! You are so talented, bud. Never stop writing. xoxo

Oh wow! Emotional and deep!! You've mastered this form and conveyed such a wondeful emotion. Beautiful writing :)

Utterly beautiful Steve. This is simply out of the world!

shobhana

Lovely write Steve!!!

Outstanding!!! this is incredible...this is the first poem ive read of yours and if your others are just as good, ill be more than happy to read them....i kno this sounds forward i guess but if you could take a look at some of my poems i would love it..great thnx!!

~!Sandra!~