Hi Nitin
this was great.....i m blown
i like the way u wrote this poem.
"So nice to have you all today
welcome to my theater of dream
ride hell while watching my play
but be silent when i scream"

just loved it........
take care
Bharti

Hey Nitin

Wow... Brilliant job!!! You wrote this poem with great creativity. I'm just amazed. Then again, its so like you. You are just amazing with your thoughts... my theater of dreams...Loved the concept. Excellent job. What else can I say besides, waiting impatiently to read the next piece. Best wishes always.

Love...
Michelle

Nitin,

This was indeed very creative and unique, nicely penned.

Best regards,

Steve

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonderful keep up the great work!!

This was really good! I don't know what to say, honestly I don't. I like it a lot though. Great job.

Umm I think that one stanza has a weird format though, but that may be just me

tonight these black curtains would fall
and our souls will fly high
if something to be heard, that will be my final call
and then we all will feel, what is there after we die

I dunno.

Keep up the good work.

Oh wow, this is amazing! Such a unique and creative poem, I love it!

"this is the place you were supposed to be
so respect my agony when i scream"

These lines are simply perfect, awesome!

Hey Nitin, I see you've made another unique master piece. I love your poems, simply for their one of a kind beauty. Nice job! Keep them coming :)

Congrats on making it at the top. It was sure well deserved. I hope one by one all of your poems make it on the top. :-)

Love...
Michelle

OMG! Nitin! this is great!

So nice to have you all today
welcome to my theater of dream
ride hell while watching my play
but be silent when i scream

Wonderful, love that first stanza, makes u want to continue reading.

This is great. the darkness is really dark not just messing-around-im-gonna-be-a-sissy-dark-poem. lol. i really like it. esp this line:
bleeding smile we yet have to go through

Nitin
Very intense and deep, dark emotions are screaming from your pen. This is a great piece you have created here.

i am so glad to have you all with me
welcome to my theater of dream
this is the place you were supposed to be
so respect my agony when i scream

I would scream with you. Then I would have a bad dream.
Love Cindy