I know exactly what you are talking about...hang in there.You are good...keep writting.

Great poem! The only thing I could say is, before you submit it check for spellings, punctutation etc. It makes it an easier read if everything is spelt correctly. Other than that I loved it, great work.
Polly

I really liked it. It souds like the struggle all people go throught at lease once in their life I didn't really see anything wrong with it. well I hope you have some more good ones like that I like reading them

That was a really good poem..keep your head up..it'll work itsself out..hit me back..peace

Great poem..it reminds me of a poem i wrote its called "Girl In the Mirror" ne way thanks so much for the comment.. and i will let you know what i decide..if you wanna email me sometime my email is beautiful_dream06@yahoo.com....ttyl Joc

The idea of someone looking in the mirror, and at the end having the twist that it is you, is so overused! Couldn't you come up with something more original that this?
Anyway, you had some good and emotive descriptions. However, in other places I felt the language could have been better, and more creative.
A fair poem, shame about the subject.

Very good. very deep.

I think this is a very strong poem. Very talented writer. Keep it up. =D

Nice poem, very nice poem. I'm disputing with myself whether or not the ending helps it or hurts it. Once again, very nice use of words, it has a very loose structure but it still flows quite nicely. I'd be interested to see how you write a poem with a rhyme scheme. If you can't come up with words that rhyme with eachother a great website for that is rhymezone.com I look forward to readin more of your poems. You are definitly going on my favorites list

Hold on!, that was a very nice poem.

So incredibly fabulious i <3 it!
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I want to cry because this is so good, i can relate to this poem. This is really good. Keep it up i love this poem.