Hey darl firstly thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me. this was really g0od. very well written a t0uching piece. keep it up

l0ve always d0ra

I love your Detail and Rhyme in this...Great job.on your rhyming..excellently done my friend..Truly Amazing..You have major talent
5/5
~The Poet~

Beautifully done.
i agree with you 100%.

Aw this made me sad, its such a beautiful poem and the words are so touching aw hun, just amazing, i honestly dont know what to say, it speaks for itself, beauty, take care,xxoo

Such a heart warmimg and touching
write...I liked it very much....

Shelby

Hey thats really a very sweet poem with very good message behind it...just loved it.

all the best and take care
5/5 for sure

You have an amazing gift of compleatly flipping a poem around in the last few stanzas. it really makes you want to re-read the poem

Ruby

I like this. I recently had a super long relationship ended. I miss these aspects of my relationship with him. I'm just not good enough I guess.
But I like this poem. It is good.
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~Sh3lby Lynn~

I dnt c how this got the ratin it did its gr8 puts my works to shame lol 5/5 from me