EOB,

Absolutely stunning write my friend.

Best regards,

Steve

Such deep power and meaning in your words! Superbly magnificent write!

Beautifully enchanting! I really love this poem, it's such a vivid piece full of hope.
Truly a delight to read, thanks for sharing. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Oh yeah, I love, love, love the 2nd stanza!

Exquisite write EOB!!!

Honestly I don't like reading love poems all that much...but I do LOVE this one! wonderful, enchanting, beautiful, exquisite,...no other words to describe this! awesome, outstanding job! definitely a 5

Mystical and powerful words, beautifully presented.

Wonderfully written; your diction and the flow of the poem are simply outstanding. it was like reading classic poetry again.

thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with us.

good luck and peace
shobhana

"Then let the beauty of this song
resound forever in my dreams
and leave afloat, my weary soul
upon its tranquil, silent streams."

I LOVE this stanza!!! Truly Magnificent. You have such a nice way with words.. I love the feeling and the flow of this masterpiece. Thank you for allowing me this rich experience of reading your poems!
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy