Absolutely fantastic! I loved every part of it! Beautiful written, it flows, it really does. Excellent sweety, love you -xxx-

Cool, I like it.......................that's all i got

Oh Daniel, Could you be any more pathetic??? L

Yes i could................

The (if you can call them freinds) thing wasn't referd to u, more to the "majority" of the group.

Great poem suz
I love your writing its so awesome
~Em

Very very good. I want to hear this song...you know...you singing...yeha I wanna hear that.

Happy 5 months!
Matt

OMFG I READ IT AGAIN
that was so bloody awesome
OMG
one of the BEST poems ive read all morning
Em

Wow... friends. Lol

That was wicked hun xox

"A symphony
Of broken dreams
And passing days
With silent screams"

WOW!! Those lines are soooo incredible! This is beautifully expressed.

I really loved your poem. It expresses a lot in a few words. It's wonderfully written.

Beatuful. your words are a song, keep it up