Wonderful Bill... A fabulous write filled with love and devotion. :)

This is absolutely amazing! great job, as always : ) i love the last line as well

A heartfelt piece filled with love, desire, and feelings that are not yet given a definition. Love carries the reader to a place where only angels have been and humans merely dream about. Absolutely astounding!!

*dreamy eyes* It was wonderful, so romantic and beautiful and lovely!

If I give you my heart and soul to care for
Will you always take care of them?

the best lines in the poem - awesome once again!

Happy Valentine's Bill!

shobhana

Bill
This beautiful love within this poem will one day come to your heart....and what a lucky lady she'll be....I loved this one Bill, so much love within this write.

love ya, Ann

Do people like this realy exist? a wonderful poem.

This is the my favorite poem of yours, Bill. It is filled with so much promise of dreams and desire. Each line creates emotion of an everlasting love. This was simply beautiful, my friend. Just perfect. Well done.

Hey, man i loved it, it was amazing! great work, im a HUGE fan of your stuff you inspire me more then you can imagine.. keep up the good work :D

Beautiful poem Bill, enjoyed

I love reading your poetry. It is so emotional, and in tune with honest feelings. Thank you. xx