Comments : Tragedy Took Over

  • 13 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I really liked this poem. It was sad and heartfelt. I think you could work on the flow of the poem though. If this is true my best to you and the families affected.

  • 13 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very sad poem and well writen to, I love it, so many emotion feelings, and a strong meaning.

    Keep up the good work.

    Thanks for you r/c

    -Josiah

  • 13 years ago

    by Richard

    Thiss is so sadd, like totally 5/5
    you are very talented , i almost cried

  • 13 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Omg thats sad...im srry that happned...ive been in depressions before but ive never loost anyone i loved in death..im always here if u need to talk...good poem to..5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Nici

    Full of emotion and well written.

    Nici

  • 13 years ago

    by amber

    Oh how sad but good poem it was great

  • 13 years ago

    by jess

    Omh. this poem was soooo sad but very well wrutten.
    i hope it isnt a true story but if it is i hope you are ok!
    love jess XxXxXxXxXx

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This is a very sad poem, its clear emotion so you can't mess with that 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by NannO

    Omg.. this is so incredibly sad.. im so sorry bout wat happened.. it made me cry.. omg.. ur poem is reli gud.. the rhyme, the flow, and most of all the powerful heartbreaking words..
    take care
    Nouna
    thnx 4 commenting on my poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey...i love this poem!!....lol you made me read it like 800 times!! lol jk but i love it, its wicked good....5/5...
    .:amanda:.

  • 13 years ago

    by Russell

    Wow that was a sad poem..and beautifully written as well.I'm sorry to hear of the deaths..Your an amazing writter, keep up the good work and take care.

    -Russell-

  • 13 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Aww that I sad, I'm sorry they died, I know it can be half my family has died in the past 4 years

  • 13 years ago

    by Marie

    That is really sad and i'm sorry!!! Sometimes the best ways to get emotion out and to be able to deal with things is to write about it! Keep it up!

    Marie

  • 13 years ago

    by speachless01

    This is obviously a very sad and emotional poem, but it has great meaning. I'm very sorry for your loss, I can tell this poem means a lot to you, and I think it really has a lot to say in so little words...keep it up...
    ~speachless01

  • 13 years ago

    by Hareem

    It's so nicely penned!
    I am deeply moved by the subject and its elaboration.
    Great poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awwww... do u need help? do u still have the child? or... according to this poem .. was it put to rest? or did i misunderstand? it must be hard for ya... if ya need any help, i'm here for you. i know what it's like to be a single mother, even tho, i've never been one. i know it's hard, cuz my dad literally raised me... and it must be depressing... but, anyway, i'm here for ya!

    big hugs,

    michelle

  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    If i could i would give this poem a 4.5.. i mean its better than a 4 but.. it has a few things about it that lower it froma 5.. one of these things is the fact that in a few stanzas there are lines that i belive are way too long.. it just makes, me , the reader skip around a little and irt throws the rs off a little bit. but i love almost everything else about it so i gave u a 5.. it so sad and sweet and powerful..she must have been a wonderful woman.. and i know she will be deeply missed...along with the baby...

  • 13 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Very beautiful poem. nice way of expression. it touched me deeply.

  • 13 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Unique poem, touching story. keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Very good poem...5/5!
    ~linz~