Omg.. this is so incredibly sad.. im so sorry bout wat happened.. it made me cry.. omg.. ur poem is reli gud.. the rhyme, the flow, and most of all the powerful heartbreaking words..
thnx 4 commenting on my poem
This is obviously a very sad and emotional poem, but it has great meaning. I'm very sorry for your loss, I can tell this poem means a lot to you, and I think it really has a lot to say in so little words...keep it up...
Awwww... do u need help? do u still have the child? or... according to this poem .. was it put to rest? or did i misunderstand? it must be hard for ya... if ya need any help, i'm here for you. i know what it's like to be a single mother, even tho, i've never been one. i know it's hard, cuz my dad literally raised me... and it must be depressing... but, anyway, i'm here for ya!
If i could i would give this poem a 4.5.. i mean its better than a 4 but.. it has a few things about it that lower it froma 5.. one of these things is the fact that in a few stanzas there are lines that i belive are way too long.. it just makes, me , the reader skip around a little and irt throws the rs off a little bit. but i love almost everything else about it so i gave u a 5.. it so sad and sweet and powerful..she must have been a wonderful woman.. and i know she will be deeply missed...along with the baby...