Traped

by Black Rose   Feb 10, 2006


The walls are closing on me blocking out the sun
I have tried so very hard to hide how I feel
But it’s only just begun

As the light starts to fade on who I use to be, I slowly retreat in to the hollow body of me

I will keep on smiling for as long as the mask does stick
But the day will come when I can no longer smile and laugh as I once did

I have tried to look happy tried to look strong but I fear I well hate what I have become

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  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    I think this is perfect as it is

    Just my humble opinion

    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. strong feelings really effectivly illustrated.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    WOW...that is so sad...and its wonderful, i love it, you are such a talented writer sweetie. I hope all of those hurt feelings aren't that extreme but hunni if they are i know how you feel becauseim going through all of this flippin crap to. Well chika i gotta go. you may email me if you like at lonely_girl_2005@hotmail.com or at trishamrshll@yahoo.com
    I will be sure to write you back.

    ~Hurting Inside~
    xxXTrishaXxx

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