Yay, finally someone has critiqued my work! thank you! really great poem. i love it!
~Sami

Mike,

Hunny, these poems are breath taking, you're so amazingly sweet. I will comment on all of these soon I promise, -hugs- and this one again cause it's not right lol...

I wonna be there with you,
Always
I love you too

Your's Truly
Jenn

Beautiful!

This is sweet and sentimental. I've been reading some really hideous poetry today so thank you for this impressive write. I liked the ending, usually it would sound cliched but I think the sincerity throughout this piece comes through really strongly and the line finishes it off well. Nice work :)

Out of the ones that I read I say this is your best one prolly because I have a weakness for love poems