Comments : Bloody Valentine

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh my God, Bill! This was simply amazing, I love it! The story, the flow, the intensity, then the perfect ending! Really awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Okay wow this is like wow ... I dunno what it is... gr8 !!! I loved it I love the story the ending the beginning the suspense the everything.. it was really hot!!! You did really good...

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    That was awesome! Loved the ending so much! This poem as just so intense and amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    The blood! The fangs! vampire loving! or not.

    anyway, it kept me riveted throughout, and it deserves the praise it's getting

    well done and hope you are enjoying your hog.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Dark and thrilling! Wonderful write Bill :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gabby

    Woah! So duz this mean the girl was a vampire or sumfink? =P
    Naah i lyk this itz pretty cool!!
    4/5
    Well done!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Wow bill!!! that was simply amazin, and written brilliantly.. i love it.. plz check out sum of mine and comment, wud luv 2 hear your opinion!!!! Neyney

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Cool poem...i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow...good poem...i really enjoyed reading it :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    My Bloody Valentine's Day poem beats yours :P hehhe jk I actually liked this one better than mine. Since you didn't have to restrict your words like I did for that challenge. I should write another one, but that dreadful day is over. Good poem Bill, you are damn good.

  • 18 years ago

    by amandaa

    Wow. breathtaking. Dark, twisted, sick, and beautiful. Amazing. Truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark_shadow0890

    Good job man i almost went into tears

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    WOW im lyk speechless...this poem was amazing...this deserves a 10\10 lol...keep it up...luv dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by bethan

    Thats soo deep. good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimmy

    It was beautiful and dark at the same time; perfect ending too. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was an awsome poem. I liked the twist at the end. I didn't see that coming at all. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, that poem was . . . at first confusing and then I think I kind of got it. Either way you had powerful discriptions, even if my punny mind couldn't follow your train of thought all the way.

    _Tainted Mikochan