LoVe lOsT

by foreverISgone   Feb 13, 2006


Death filled tears wipe them away.
your laziness is my only desire
Darkness is denied in prayer, you drink poison to ease your pain, when you bleed from every pore and get stained.

Blast a gun, pull a sword, kill this vivid dream
This killer on lose, this poison in the jar, push upon these broken chains

the dimly lit cell is but a glimpse of how lonely you really are. A nightmare much to real...
I'm scared of this person you've made me become. Who I'm not is who you you think I am, bitter torment find fault in something perfect,

When I'm wrong you make me believe that your the only right one, I'm sick of my lost love die a wretched painfully slow death in the pit of decide and anguish. abound by love abound by hate abound these chains where I wait

** not a very good poem but i tried**

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    by Kayla Marie

    Yes I Did Really Like Your Poem, I Like Them All Actually. Sorry It Took So Long To Reply, I'm Not On Here A Whole Lot. Keep Up The Good Work.

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    by Kayla Marie

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    by Bradley Peter

    Hey. Thanks for voting oon my poem 'The Choice', you comments were and always are most appricaited. I've noticed that your poems are mainly sad, that's not a critasisum, just an observation by the way.

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