Poetry

by JJ   Feb 13, 2006


I sensed her warmth
in the beaming sun
rejuvenating my soul
as the day begun

I yielded her breath
upon my skin
softly caressing,
teasing the wind

I tasted her sweetness
in the morning dew
innocent as a flowers
first bloom

I felt her wetness
in the rain
tempting, as she danced
upon my pain

And late at night
I spied her on the moon
fading away goodbyes
as she promised to return soon

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  • 18 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice write! i really enjoy it, keep up the good work!
    god bless
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow this is absolutely breath taking... exquizette.

  • 19 years ago

    by Azure :)

    You remind me of a close friend, each word you have writen is so meaning ful and shows a fab image, well writen and god bless xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, I most say this is a
    beautifully passionate written
    poem, no doubt. excellent job
    and thank you for sharing your
    wonderful work, Write On,
    Bogie

  • 19 years ago

    by KJD

    That flows so well! Awsome job! I like the comparison you put in there... Poetry, but still sounds as if a beautiful women has swept away your breath under your feet

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