Wow Mikochan. I love this poem, i could not agree more with it. You are right, I dont understand why people have to be so cruel and discriminate against certain people. this was a great poem and was 100% true. Amazing as always, I love your writing more and more everyday.

You're amazing babe..this poem shows only a snippet of that thoughtfulness i was talking about!
you give me hope, something to aspire to be.
always here for you huni,
a friend you'll always find in me..
xoxoxox

Amazing. i love the message and the structure....totally agree

I Love the lay out and the message

This was awesome! I think the message shone through perfectly and it was very meaningful. T
he structure you used was amazing because it had a sense of echo whilst reading it, and had a great effect on me.
Take care,
Luv Riffy xxx

This poem was really good & i understood the message you were trying to teach. i loved it. 5/5

I love this poem. It had a nice flow to it and I liked that way that you made it rhyme. It had a lovely style to it. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

Loved this poem I haven't seen a poem like this on here truely original...I gave it a 5

I reallly liked the style of this poem. I haven't seen it before on this site so far! I did like the message and really I can't think of a thing to improve on it. The only thing is now you've made me want to check out more of yours :) Keep writing. Don't stop.